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for Beautiful Dragon

by SublimeTransgression

person MB
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't believe it when I checked this story and saw that you had no reviews. It must be because of the section you posted it under(I found it while doing a search for veela fics and in all honesty actually didn't check to see what section you posted it under but it's the only reason I can think of that more people didn't read and review it). Your story is very intriguing. I had to laugh about Ron being homophobic. Hope that comes up in further chapters. I can't wait to see where you go from here. You've added a lot of twists that I don't usually see. Usually if there's an Italian veela it's Blaise and not a different character. I also like the twist of making Pince and Filch voyers and Snape being Italian.