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for Forgetten Life

by sybersnake

schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome can't wait for the next chapter hop[e it comes soonm. ^_^
person Fate-Angel
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really looking good.
How could you just stop it there!?
=^-^=
person Roquet
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i always wondered if you were going to continue this fic...i guess you are! yays!!!
person JuKiKo
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i wish you'd continue this story as fast as possible >_<
i mean wow, it's so great!!! normally i prefere to only read complete stories but i begun reading the first sentences and was captured >_<
very well written, and i can't wait to see what'll happen next!!

please keep on writing!! ^^ (and mpreg forever*lol*)
person addie
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's really hard to follow the story right now are these some memories or present tense i get what's going on and all but it's hard to grasp that the scene has changed without a fromal break it takes like three lines before y0u realized it's changed. i love the story just some nice constructive criticism with oodles of love!!
write more so my smut/angst furled brain can survive
person Sophia
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very nice chapter. I really like how it's developing and etc. Keep up the great work.
person Sophia
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting start and I would love to see how it develops. I hope all turns out okay for Severus and Harry. Keep up the great work.
person Hambares
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More soon please! Looks good!