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for For His Pleasure

by elibdally

person Anon
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sorry, i didn't read your author's note, when i wrote the other review, take as much time as you want, just get better okay. bye.
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can you update really soon!
person pyrostarglow
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. just read what you have so far.. I'm enjoying it, an intresting twist on the characters. I'm sorry you were hurt and hope you feel better soon. Have a great day and please continue.
person KatDiva
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Olga Lala,

I absolutely adore this version of the Veela Draco and Hermione!

I have read several others, but this has a nice twist to it. I like the detail you put into your characters, staying true to them, as well as their surroundings.

I just finished Chapter 6, and can't wait for your update! I even recommended this story in my chapter 6 of my fanfic, "Dance with the One that Brought You." :-)

Thank you, and keep up the great writing! Be well.
person Pookie
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it!!!
person LupinsLady
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry to hear of your recent hospitalization. Hope all is well with you. I've been following this story since you first posted it and was wondering why there weren't any updates. It's very good, of course I'm partial to the Draco/Hermione stories and I love the Draco/Veela stories. So you are all right in my book Lala.

I have a suggestion for you to make things difficult. Harry could come and save Hermione from her imprisonment, thus causing the jealous Draco to come to life. I love the jealous Draco Veela (fans herself)he's so hot.
person LuvMonger
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Take your time with the chapter!! Just get better!! Fanfic is great but your health is more important!! I hope you are feeling better!!**^_^**
person Samantha
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I lovvvveeeee this story so much. its fantastic! please update sooon!!!!!!
person KatDiva
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am SO glad that I found this story... I've just read Chapter 1 and am on to the rest of it now. Before I continued I wanted to drop you a review, and let you know how fantastic this first chapter is! It is captivating, and really holds my interest!

Most Hermione/Draco stories are very cliche... not to mention the whole overdone Veela aspect... but not this one! You've put a nice twist to, and it's refreshing!

Thank you!
person rayn
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i hope you are doing well. and i just want you to know that i cant wait for your update