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for For His Pleasure

by elibdally

person Anon
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon its been way to long!!!!
person Katay
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story, you have an interesting plot and its really different from the others of its genre - awesome job! One thing I noticed ... Great Britain and France differ by about an hour, France being one hour ahead of the UK. I may have misunderstood the paragraph, and if so I apologize! But good job and keep it coming!
person jaimelee
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story... please update soon!
person EmandSky
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh.my.god! please update quick, i love it!
person kcstrata
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to write again? I'm hooked!
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg i loved the preview and need more please !!
person Verie
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I like how you interpreted Draco pleading for his life selflessly. Very Touching indeed. Continue Please.
Nawdz
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. This is one of the best DracoVeela! stories I've read, if not the best. I read your note about how you weren't getting as many reviews...and I'm sorry. I read this story a while ago and never reviewed it, even though I really liked it. I beg a thousand pardons. I know what that's like--I have poems on deviantart that NO ONE looks at. Oh, well. I don't write because I want people to think I'm the greatest thing since sliced bread, so I guess I'll just have to get used to it. :-)
Oh, yeah. CONTINUE THE STORY, DAMMIT! I HATE CLIFFHANGERS! *takes deep breaths* okay, now that I've got that off my chest...
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you will come back and update soon. I really love this story!
person Anon
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love draco/hermione veela stories and this story is wonderful please update really soon i NEED to know what happens next