rate_review Reviews

I love this story. Please keep writing it. It's actually a good Draco/Hermione veela mate story. (I've read some rather crappy ones)

i love this story, big fan of veela stories. Since i am not wan to rewiew often i red your plee at your last chapter. So from now on after reading a chapter i will review. But you have to hurry up and update haha!

seriously- what has happened to hermione?? she's so meek, the hell? they kidnapped her and she happily agrees to sing a duet together with draco? i can understand that she might not want him dead, but why in the world is she acting so friendly with his parents??

I remember reading this fic when you first started writing it and have to admit that I'm slightly dissappointed in this chapter. Don't get me wrong, I was ecstatic that you updated, but this chapter just does not seem to be on par with the others. All of your chapters have a couple spelling or grammer errors, but this is fanfiction and there are no paid editors to fine-tooth each chapter, so it's to be expected (I can't tell you how many errors I find in my writing). But this chapter seemed to have at least twice the amount of errors than the last one. I really do like this story and appreciate how it's not quite like the other veela fics I have read in the past. I will continue to look for updates, because I really do love this story, but just wanted to express my opinion that this chapter does not seem to accurately reflect the level of writing that you have proven yourself capable of.

Great post. Love the story, please post again soon. Thanks.

Update...update...you know you want to. This story is by far the best veela Draco story that I have read. I think that the approach you took for Draco becoming a veela was original. Please update soon...I want to know what happens

not too shabby, i read the whole thing in one hit and i liked it

This is a great story. I cant wait to see what happens next, so please please update ASAP!

omg you MUST update NOW NOW NOW...this story ROCKS!! i love the concept...i love the reluctant hermione...but even more, i love the soon to be willing hermione! i adore "this side" of the malfoys...on with the smut scene!!

this is AWESOME! Update soon please!!