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for For His Pleasure

by elibdally

schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOUR STORIES! I was wondering are you gonna update your story "One in the Million"?
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay u updated :D again again sooon! congrats on your baby aswell love! x
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg more please! congrads!!
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please please update this!
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a very good story I hope that you find the time and will to finish it soon
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey i actually love Veela fanfic now & this 1 is really great!!! keep going on i wish to read more chapter :)
person Tootsie
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your Plot is cool. up date plzzz.
person ryzmah
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that I think that you are doing a great job on this story. Your style and tempo are developing quite well. So many people rush through their story and bravo for not doing that. I know that you said that this story was coming to the end, but I would recommend that you don't rush the ending. If you have the desire you could turn this into a 30 plus chapter story. You have a lot of areas that you could explore.

Also I wanted to encourage you to write for the love of writing. I know that it can be disheartening when you don't get as many reviews as time goes on, but that doesn't mean people aren't enjoying it.

Anyway, once again good job and I hope you update soon.

Ryz
person Anon
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person EmandSky
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update soon! i love this!