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for For His Pleasure

by elibdally

person Larrabee
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love Veela FF! And this one doesn't dissapoint. I can't wait to read the Bonding! (kinky)
And I can't wait to see Harry & Ron's reactions! And the Weasleys!!! haha. You write so well, its obvious that this is a well planned fic. I can't wait to read more. Like how was Voldermort defeated? Who survived? Did they skip their 7th year and now are going to repeat it? Or did Voldermort get defeated during 6th? How will Ronald react? Its obvious Hermione doesn't have strong feelings for him... hmmm.
Are they going to get married right away? Or is Hermione going to make him wait until after graduation? What about children... veelas are known for reproducing? Hopefully, she doesn't get pregnant during school! Are Hermione and Draco Head Students?

I'm excited, can't you tell. Squee! I can't wait for the next chapter.

All the best, as always.
person Tootsie
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally Just happy you update (^_^) .. Cong. with baby girl.
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i still think hermione is letting him push her around far too much! where's hermione's backbone?
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi lala, I have read the first two chapters of your story and look forward to reading more. I would suggest you find someone to beta because there are a few mistakes. Some readers don't mind a few mistakes but others, like myself, get thrown off by them. Thanks! Keep up the good work!
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooohh, what a evil point to stop, evil cliffhanger! I am enjoying this possessive Draco, it's very sexy and panty-wetting :D
And you used Sleeping Sun by Nightwish! I LOVE NIGHTWISH, they're my favourite band! (I'm listening to Wanderlust right now)

Good work, I'll be watching out for next chapter ;D
Btw, congratulations for the birth of your daughter :)
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I've missed this story and was so happy to see an update. I hope you can update again soon..... Congrats on the baby girl!
person mhaj78
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! thanks for updating!! really looking forward to the next chap. and hey, congrats on the new baby!
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful fic, can't wait for the rest... what a cliffie. Draco is great in this. I loved his slight yet tempered arrogance in this last chapter.
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've just read this from beginning to end, and wow, this is great! Congrats on your baby, but if I may be selfish, YOU CAN'T END THIS, YOU CAN'T, IT'S TOO GOOD! Thanks for sharing your great story!
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love veela fics where draco is the veela and Hermione is the mate (no slash for me). your story is very good and quite original : I like that draco was infected, it is different from the usual genetics thing.
Update soon please, you can't leave us with such a cliff-hanger.