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for For His Pleasure

by elibdally

person DarkSummerNights
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
most defenetly caught my attention, please continue!
person Donavon.
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love Veela stories. So will watch for an update. However, how can you ask for opinions, when nothing in the very short chapter, has happened yet!
person whogirl
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This certainly has caught my eye and I can't wait to read more.
person Meredith
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please continue...
person firewall
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This is a fantastic beginning! I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
person ke
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very promising beginning. looking forward to another chapter.
person Julz
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, this defintely caught my attention, please continue!
person anon
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This sounds very very interesting!!! Update soon please!!!
person carabella
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
definitely attention-getting, do continue :)
person fansick
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think that you may have something here,abd would love to see it continue.