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for For His Pleasure

by elibdally

person tank
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is good so it is! the intensity of draco is more unique in this stoy
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person fansick
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it ! May I please have some more.
person Claudiayinfa
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi Lala.


I'm a big fan of your work. I've been trying to contact to you so that I could email you. But your given email address doesn't work. My messages are sent back to me. When are you updating your other stories. I've been anxious to read 'Caught in the rain' that story is so wonderful even if you just wrote one chapter. Enough to make me want to read more and addicted to your writing. *Grin.* The other story I'm talking about is 'One In A Million' I love that beela story. I love the way you descbribe draco. He sounds so possessive, dark, and most of handsome. The devil himself, that is. Lol. I hope that you get this message and reply back to my questions. When are you updating the stories I was talking about. I want to know most of all if your going to continue with 'Caught In The Rain.' I totally love that chapter. I hope you reply back. Please email me back. I beg you! (",)

Thanks, and good luck with you writing!

Michelle
person Allison
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow i really like this so far!!! i hope you continue, you have a great writing style!
person Erica
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice picture...horrible teaser. Haha.

I am so happy to see that you update as often as you do! Most of my favorite fanfics hardly ever update anymore. Keep posting new stuff!
person mina
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue this story So far I really like it! lol Making Draco sniff his Fathers hand! wow thats going to be something he will resent Hermione for.
person Ava
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You've definitely caught my attention with this fic. I hope there's more soon!
person Danielle
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh oh oh oh!! I love this so far. It's such a fresh take on the Veela stories out there..
I hope you update this soon, because your doing an amazing job on it =)
person Mariah
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nice work, keep it going and don't be discouaged by what others say. if you need any help in the story you can email me about it.