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for For His Pleasure

by elibdally

person firewall
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well now, I certainly hope you can update quickly. I really need to know how they are going to help Draco out of this nasty spot he's in.
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it, i love your story and the picture, yep, you should make the story like that. lucius captures hermonie and give her as a gift to draco, that real interesenting you should make it like that.
person Anon
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh. continue please
person yukeyto felton
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! that was the best two chapters of anything that i have ever read!! i would really like it if you would update really really really fast your fanfiction saved me from boredom! i hope you update like tomarrow! and you are doing a great job too. another thing is your not going to finish one in a million i really loved that story that was one of the best veela storys i have ever read and i am really disapointed but what can you do, im just glad you made a new fanfic! keep up the good work!
person teanah
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait to see lucius' reaction when he finds out all about this. the picture really was a tease because now im even more intrigue to see how hermione's going to be caught. can't wait for the next one!
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person nephiel
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! I like the first two chapters...well you must admit that by there not being many Veela stories around yours was certainly bound to have a lot of audience ;)
I saw the drawing... honestly? I don't think using crayons(is that what you used?) helped at all, maybe if the drawing was left un-colored it would have left some more details out.

However I hope you'll update soon... I wonder how a Veela biting Draco and turning him into a lusting wretch will go. Hm
person Panther Eyes
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ur gonna play-by-play the malfoy test results until we all pulling our hair out r u?
person moonwaves15
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay i'm hooked please don't stop this one I like this new take on being a veela
person Bea
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated! Definitely can't wait to read more of this (and One in a Million when you get over that block)

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