rate_review Reviews

Interesting....It is a little rushed, and the explination for Hr being D mate is a little unbelieveable, especially since the virus part is very interesting and has some reaslism too it.

I look forward to seeing what you will do with this.

I love Veela stories! I can't wait to see what Lucius does to get Hermione! I kinda hope he's mean and Draco kicks his ass!!! I look forward to reading more! Update soon, please!!

This one of the best veela stories so far that I have ever read keep up the very good work!!!! But I have one favor to ask you and that is that you don't make their relationship purely sexual because those are just kinda really stupid and their not very interesting. Not that I'm saying you will do that is just that some are like that that started out really good and I just wanted to go ahead and ask before you were to far into the story. OH and I like how you are portraying DM's parents!!! I can hardly wait for the next chapter and update soon please!!!!

please update soon. love the story

This is awesome! Please post more soon. I like most veela stories, and this was is quite different. Heck, you haven't even had any Hermione action, and we need to have some Hr/D action soon!

Really great. I love your portrayal of the whole Veela idea. Very unique.

I'm very glad you updated this, it was a nice chapter that keeps my interest and sparks the desire to know what happens next. Well written and exciting!

This story is fan-friggin'-tastic i love it! Thiis story is GREAT!!!!!!!!!

keep going! I am hooked!! Can't wait for more!!

Great story. PLEASE continue.