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for For His Pleasure

by elibdally

person Kelly
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it and can't wait for more! MUST be continued!!!
person Rachel
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! I can not wait to see what happens next and how Hermione will take this! update soon!
person Claudiayinfa
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much, Lala! Your're the best.
I'm glad you took my note into consideration.
This story keeps in getting better everytime
you update. I can't wait to read about their plan.
I can't wait to read about my fave character, Hermione
along with Draco. They make the best couple. The forbidden couple.
I love your stories. I can't wait to read about Hermione's appearance.
Please make her look beautiful. Beautiful so that when her future in laws get a suprise.
The suprise of seen a beautiful swan instead an ugly ducking. Ugly or not. Hermione is the best. But with the way you described her hair...I'm getting anxious to read more.
Could you make her eyes look amber please. Goldish, I mean. I saw this
picture of her with Amber eyes (yelloish with gold) and ligh golden brown hair, she looked really beautiful. Heck- I'm a girl, but she did, for real, looked beautiful. After all, all
Malfoys only have the best, the best of the best. Please update soon.

Thank you so much (",)

Michelle
person mina
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME!!!!!! GREAT!!! WONDERFUL!!!! Please continue!!!! I can't wait to see how Hermione reacts to all this!
person kris.t!n.e
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
One thing i like about this fic is that makes it slightly different is that Draco being a veela, is not based on ancestors being veela or part veela. Draco got bittin/stung/poisened... and now he's infected or it turned him... sorta vampire-esque... anyways keep up the great work... update soon..
person localsamurai
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. Update soon.
person Mariah Thomas
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yet, another wonderful chapter that has been added, lovely dear just lovely, write more for you have a wonderful story line in your minds eye, you give me insperation to start with my writing, so keep on going and don't let anyone make you feel that it is not worth it.

your constant reader

Mariah
person Atlanta
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
finally! a veela story that has some originality about it! loving this ! update!
person DA4life
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice update ... i wonder what will happen next
person ripewickedplum12
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think you are right their aren't enough Draco Veela stories out their. ON that note I really like your stories you are a really creative author. Continue your great work.