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for For His Pleasure

by elibdally

person oxcab
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved it ^_^ up date soon
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm interested to see how you will be ending this fic.
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow I love this story. Please write more.
~Ruby~
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Epilogue please. lol Great update, I can't wait for more!
person mlui
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! You should definitely write an epilogue! Please update again soon!
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^_^ i love veela stories and this is one of the better one's i've read. Really looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great update and i can't wait to read more
person smmz79
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok so on to the bonding... yeah i am so glad that you are posting i hope that you continue like i said i love veela draco.... i like how you wrote him in this really dominating i think that is how a veela would act before bonding....
person smmz79
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohhh wow that was great... and very cool how he instinctively knew when to claim her and how... i hope you post the last chap soon i am looking forward to it... and i do hope that you post an epilopgue i think that would be nice as well.....
person Nicky111
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story!!! I can't wait for them to finish bonding. But I am also curious as to if you have plans on finishing One in a Million. That is a great story, and it would be a shame for it to just be dropped.