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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey your story is really good, hope you continue.
maybe you should think of finding a beta, don't take this the wrong way, but i found out that someone else reading your work helps a lot because the errors we over see they find it.
i really liked and hope you don't take this the bad way.
keep up
nina
maybe you should think of finding a beta, don't take this the wrong way, but i found out that someone else reading your work helps a lot because the errors we over see they find it.
i really liked and hope you don't take this the bad way.
keep up
nina
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally! You finally updated, yay! Anyways, more Hermione! I hope that Hermione doesn't give in that easily! And I hope Harry and the Orders (excluding Snape) would go and save her ... maybe Dumbledore; he'll probably do ANYTHING to win the war or whatever. Hell; he'll probably like the idea of Hermione and Draco together! *Shudders* Anyways; update a.s.a.p! PLEASE!
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The light already won the war... Anyway, great story. update soon
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
moremoremoremore!!!!! i can\'t wait for you to finish the story!!!
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! lol Ok now you know you have to update this story!
This is too good for words!
Omg they kidnapped her! lol
This is too good for words!
Omg they kidnapped her! lol
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol, that last part was just so funny to me! I love this story and I definitely can't wait to read more!
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lolz, i love it and can't wait for the next update.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow Can't wait for more!!
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If I was Hermione, I'd be like "OH, HELL NAW!!!" First these people come in on behalf of their son who's been a bastard to her proposing that she gets physical with him... AND THEN OBLIVATES them then STUPIFYing her after she declines their offer oh hell no!
Sorry I'm just venting right now for hermione when she regains consciousness at Malfoy manor. this was good!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Sorry I'm just venting right now for hermione when she regains consciousness at Malfoy manor. this was good!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Give them HELL Hermione!
i just wanted to add more. I liked how you described the Granger family and their home. In my opinion this has been the closest depiction of Hermione's social status in the muggle world because its justified by her parents' occupation as dentists.
Great job!
i just wanted to add more. I liked how you described the Granger family and their home. In my opinion this has been the closest depiction of Hermione's social status in the muggle world because its justified by her parents' occupation as dentists.
Great job!