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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story, I love the style you write in, a mix of old fashion and modern. XD You're one of my favorite fanfiction writers from now on!
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
How could you stop there?
I loved it!
You need to continue and do longer chapters!
Until next time my dear talented writer!
How could you stop there?
I loved it!
You need to continue and do longer chapters!
Until next time my dear talented writer!
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story so far. However,I have problem with this sentence. France is not a day ahead of England. :P
"If you would remember, France is a day ahead of us.
"If you would remember, France is a day ahead of us.
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A little Draco/Hermione interaction would have been nice..but for the quality sake of the story..I really liked this chapter! The build up makes it that much better when the do interact ;D Great job!
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh!, lala. I'll be waiting!
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is good! And different from other Veela stories. I loved the scene at the Grangers...which I reread before this new chapter. Great job! Taking Hermione, the letter from Fleur's father, the others not knowing quite what Veelas are and their needs, brilliant!!!
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
>:( i.....am mad that u ended it there. i mean the chaps rnt small but since they go a lil slow a lil more length would b appreciated!! geez and a lil cliffy!! pfft, ok it was more of a hill but come on. as u can tell me likes a lot, update asap plz. +insert begging here+ >.<
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love the story, too bad it's going to be short, but anyway who cares i love that one in a million story, update soon,cause i waited a long time for chapter 5. bye.
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great ..... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!