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for For His Pleasure

by elibdally

person sarah
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chappie. im glad you have taken the straightforward approach and not let hermione and draco dance around each other for ages until they decided on what to do. update!
person teanah
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehe i like the robins. can't wait for the next chapter!
person Inspire
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm pleased to see Draco acting better than his father about forcing her. Thanks for the update
person localsamurai
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must say that was probably the most in character veela Draco I have read. I think that is exactly how he would act when trying to woo Hermione. Update soon.
person gypsy
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woot! another lovely chap! -___-........u cannot b serious about that review complaint. have u looked around this site? u hav around 160 reviews and only 6 chapters, SIX CHAPTERS!! there r fics w/ 15 chaps and 80, the fic just below urs today has 20ch and around 120 reviews. U HAV NO REASON TO FEEL DISCOURAGED, unless UR getting bored w/ it and dont wanna write it anymore, or just dont hav the time; but it has absolutely nothing to do w/ the readers or amount of reviews. stop going the math to find out exactly how much feedback uve gotten per update, and write a new chap; mayb then the responses would go up. plz, continue this story, u hav a captive audience. <3
person lisa
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like it. can't wait for next update
person Pinky
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story.
Just wondering if you were going to continue "One In A Million"?
person AEH
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story! Update soon!
person ShilohDarke
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a pretty good story. I like the whole concept. I have always had this sneaking suspicion that Draco is truly enamored of Hermione and that is why he picks on her constantly. I love it! Please update soon.

Shiloh
person hannah
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! please please please continue! I love how you are making the characters and its almost believable how everything would happen! ahhh! what about harry and ron?!