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for For His Pleasure

by elibdally

person me
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm still here!
i like it.
its ..i dont know quite romantic
person Jaime
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I've always read it but just never had the time to review. I can't wait to see how you're going to end this. Is it bad of me to want Lucius to die?
person TiffANY
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Again GREAT chapter, please continue!

UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person LupinsLady
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I feel bad now that I havn't reviewed your story, usually I do while reading a story. I am enjoying it thoroughly though. I love the "Draco is a Veela" stories. Can't wait for another update. Good Job!!!
person koneko-chan
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story's not losing me! I still keep tabs on it and look for updates. Keep going! I can't wait until the next chapter.
person angel
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww that was soo sweet i love it and im glad mione said yes .... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person angelnomiko
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was great i love it ... please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angelnomiko
person Sarah
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading your story and I quite enjoy the twist on the cliche veela format, it's made it much more interesting. Perhaps less people are reviewing, not because they're losing interest, because they too wish that you wouldn't end the story so soon. It seems like it could go on for much more than just a few more chapters, and I certainly know I'd like it to. Keep up the good work, just stretch it out a bit more. Please?
person Mariah Thomas
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good chappter, don't feel discouraged, keep on writing if it is you passion and you do write very good. continue on and don't worry about what others say,
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this chpter, i'm glad hermione is begin nice to him and draco is also begin nice to her. update soon, cause i can't wait anymore.