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for For His Pleasure

by elibdally

person Amy
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story and im enjoying it immensly...anticipating updates daily....lol....I would luv to see a version of this story with a slightly more darker veela version of draco...ya know? anybody who wants to write that id definitely read it! lol...but keep it up witht his story sucks that its almsot finished but....as they say all good things must come to an end...lol
person Vicky
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story...I check everyday to see if there's more to come. I adore Veela!Draco fics, and this is one of the best I've seen. Please, sir, I want some more! =)
person 2bfoundwanting
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, its pretty original for a Veela fic, which is hard to say, because there are TONS out there. Anyways, its good, good concept good character. I cant wait till the next chapter, i hope you finish it soon!
person mnfm
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'll be waiting for the last chapter; but I have to tell you something. I wish this story would be longer. I think is a great story; I'm sorry people stop reviewing it.

You do good work, keep it up!

person Jessie
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I personally love Draco/Hermione Veela fics, especially this one. I just wish it was going to be more than one more chapter! :)
person Shadow Wolf
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And yet another one.

Rating: PG:13...will get higher eventually!

What part of Adultfanfiction do you writers not get. We have two ratings on this site, NC-17 and R.

If your going to write PG13 go to fanfiction.net or other sites for kids. This is adult, no wonder the site is loosing authors, with people writing PG stuff, I get it now.

I was going to read the story but seeing the PG13 rating, aint no way.
person sarah
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
absoloutely LOVE this. can't wait for the next chappie! update!!
person Galina
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great! It is the best that`s i ever read. I am fron Russia. That`s why language so bad.
person firefairy
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't think that people are losing intrest in your story because of the lack of reviews. I read many stories and only interview when i think the author needs a "pick me up" or asks for ideas (in the case of a block) I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. Please up date soon.
person Avanell
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I still like it :) No, love it! I think they might want to get to the bonding part ;)