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rocks, update soon.

I think you are losing readers and reviews is that this story is becoming less and less believable. Other than Hermione choosing Draco out of guilt nothing of this is in character. You need a Beta to help with your verb issues. I am sorry but Obilivate is not a cure all and not enough to wipe the entire memory of their child from their mind. There would be ramifications of their actions that Magical Creature law won't cover. You have wiped away human rights to get this couple together and that just doesn't work

I enjoy the Draco(Veela)/Hermione fics, and I have to say that I can't wait to see what will happen with the young couple next.
@>-',- @>-,'- roses to the author
--Angel

first: A big hello from Germany!

second: i love your story!!!!

third: Please write more, i love veela storys (HERMIONE/DRACO)!

You see there are three very good reasons to write more and continue
your story!

- to know each other
- the marriage
- back at school
- after school
So pleeeease continue!!!

ciao Lanthir

Yes, you are losing reviewers and such. This is NOT how HERMIONE is! What did you do! It's suppose to be challenging! How can Hermione give in THAT easily? Using the excuse that Draco is going to die, is NOT good enough. You made Hermione into a well, Gryffinor sissy, P.S. Hermione is a GRYFFINDOR, make her ACT like ONE!

Just dropping a line to let you know that I am enjoying this fic very much. And it was very nice of Draco to offer to make sure that Hermione stays out of jail.

Great story! I'd love to read more because you've caught my interest with this one. ^_^ Please continue.

I meant to review earlier, but I recently found this fic and I have to say that it is one of the most unique Veela fics I've ever read, which means a lot with all the ones that pop up. Usually, they annoy me, but I really enjoyed yours. I cannot wait to see the next chapter, and some hot Veela 'marking' ;) I do have one suggestion, though: I noticed throughout the story that some of the words have been misspelled, but that's nothing you can't fix with a beta, which I'm sure plenty of avid readers like myself would be all too happy to provide. Other than that, though, again, I can't wait. Love it, definitely going to check out the rest of your stuff.

love the story...update soon!!! you should make a sequel just so you know. :-D

I love this story. I can't wait to see how it finaly ends up. I enjoy your writing style.