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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry to hear you've been sick. I hope you feel better; and you're right, Draco should not get the girl to easy. (They hurt her and her family).
Well, maybe another comfontation with his father and Sev, or if she wants the situation with her parents fixed, but suddently its to late (an accident or something).
Yeah, maybe it's to tragic, I know;(that is why I don't dare to write anything) but it will give him a chanch to prove himself. I hope this helps.
Well, maybe another comfontation with his father and Sev, or if she wants the situation with her parents fixed, but suddently its to late (an accident or something).
Yeah, maybe it's to tragic, I know;(that is why I don't dare to write anything) but it will give him a chanch to prove himself. I hope this helps.
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Glad that your out of the hospital, keep getting better. I can't wait for the next update>
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1!
Wow, that was a very interestinf start, it pulled me in right away. Very good! I am looking forward to reading more.
PEACE♥
Wow, that was a very interestinf start, it pulled me in right away. Very good! I am looking forward to reading more.
PEACE♥
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2!
WOW! Now that is very different! Usually Draco is born a Veela and not turned into one, I think this is more interesting, being that he was poisened! That is pretty cool turn of events. Very original! I like it alot!
WOW! Now that is very different! Usually Draco is born a Veela and not turned into one, I think this is more interesting, being that he was poisened! That is pretty cool turn of events. Very original! I like it alot!
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3~
OH my, the suspense. Hpever will they get Hermione? Oh, this is exciting!
OH my, the suspense. Hpever will they get Hermione? Oh, this is exciting!
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4~ Well, by any means they get her, and it worked! LOL! Pretty awesome chapter!
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6!
Whew! I was worried she would not accept him! That was so great that she did! AWESOME!
Whew! I was worried she would not accept him! That was so great that she did! AWESOME!
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH! I hope you are okay and that everything is alright now.
*hugs*
PEACE♥
*hugs*
PEACE♥
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am glade that you are feeling better and out of the hospital. Don't feel so bad my freshman year in high school I ended up in the hostpial on valentines day. Well I was admitted the day before but I was stuff there becuase I had a bacterial in fection in my blood. Let me tell you I was weaker than a new born kitten. Ever since then I have hated Valentines day. Anyway Please update very soon. There are not enough veela stories out there about drac/hermione. Anyway please update.
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Glad to know that your going to be updateing soon, and Im very sorry to hear about your hospitlistation and hope you have a speedy recovery. If you want things to be difficult for Draco and Hermionie but still want the sex scean, you could have it that after a veela mates they dont nesaceraly have to have sex ever again with thier chosen one, they just have to be near them, but then the mated pair could slowly go into a depresive state, or Draco could then properly try to suduce Hermionie.
Hope that the suggestion helps.
Hope that the suggestion helps.