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for For His Pleasure

by elibdally

person lizard3731
schedule October 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like your story so far; however, you should get a beta/proofreader, since there are lots of spelling errors. "Buns and burner" is probably the worst. It should be "Bunsen burner."
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hoping that you update... i love this story and keep checking back!!
schedule May 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Such a good story! I have been waiting for FOREVER for you to write another chapter (and I check back pretty often...) please please please?
person jaceni50
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I definately think that you should write an epilogue to have a sense of closure. Thanks for actually almost finishing the fic since not many veela stories even come close to an ending. Great story. I'll wait for the epilogue and hopefully you update soon or just let us know that it won't happen so we won't wait. :)
schedule July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love the story please update
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
are you finishing the story? its good
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Well done!
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is one of the best draco/hermione stories. please update soon
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a totally hot and sensual story....can't wait for the next chapter and who doesn't LOVE Veela Draco
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a totally hot and sensual story....can't wait for the next chapter and who doesn't LOVE Veela Draco