rate_review Reviews

I simply adored your lovely story, and now am off to read more of your work!!! Thanks for all your efforts

I loved this story, read it all in one day :)
I also loved how the characters and plot progressed, it was realistic in the sense that time was an important factor. And I whole-heartedly agree with your interpretation of Lucius, the cunning, intelligent, manipulative, dashing older gentleman. I admire the way you stayed true to his character to the end, him having his reasons and ideals and yet keeping them through everything. Keep writing more stories (and please update).

But a few words of mine? Hmmm...how about 26?

> Admirable.
> Brilliant.
> Commendable.
> Deluxe.
> Excellent.
> Fantastic.
> Gratifying.
> Heavenly.
> Incredible.
> Jubilation.
> Keen. (Scraping the barrel with that one! lol!)
> Lovely
> Marvelous.
> Nice.
> Obliging.
> Perfection.
> Quality.
> Reputable.
> Stupendous.
> Talented.
> Unique.
> Valued.
> Wonderful.
> X ==> appealing to my X chromosomes?? I'm lost with this one! Maybe Lia and her vocabulary can help!
> Yummy (scraping the barrel, again).
> Zealous.

I know, I know!

X-Rated! yay!

I must say, I enjoyed this one very much. I started it the other day while going crazy waiting for updates on Prisoners of Love. ;)

A great story, and a wonderful heroine. And of course, as usual, you have Lucius perfectly in all of his lovely facets.

So here's my back story: I haven't been on adultfanfiction.net in a long time, and I came back due to some kind of recommendation a friend gave me. Needless to say, it kind of blowed. I went to a few other fics, hoping to find the GOOD stuff, and didn't find jack shit. And then, I stumbled upon this little jewel.

It was fantastic. Your writing is the writing that makes this site worth looking at, and not some plotless shit that most people tend to write about. Well, that's not exactly a bad thing, I guess. I mostly just have a problem with badly written pieces, and yours was just plain bloody wonderful. Nice flow, wonderful vocabulary, and believable characters made this fic zoom to the top of my Best Fanfics Ever. Your writing style captured both of Lea and Lucius' viewpoints perfectly without getting too wrapped up in their heads or just skimming the surface.

I hope you continue to produce such brilliant pieces, even if it is fan fiction. Sadly, I'm not going to be able to read your Lucius/Hermione fic at this moment--I have to return to real life. Feel free to email me; it's legit. Good luck!

Beautifully written. I enjoy how lucius reatins his cold heartedness even when faced with love.
Lea's story is so tragic! I really pity her.
The link to her and Slitheryn is origional and interesting.
the only qualm I have is Narcissa's involvement?
are they togther or divorced?

sorry if thats an irrelevent question!!

I enjoy your writing very much m'dear, keep suprising me =p

JI as LM = sex!!

I don't know how old this story is, but I've just been reading ir and I really like it.

This was a fun read. This is the second story I read of yours and it is nice to observe an evolution in terms of writing style. This is far smoother than LM's Second Wife. I look forward to reading your other serials.

I LOVE your writing style as well as the story itself. Too few writers are willing to touch upon Lucius Malfoy's sexual nature-at least his straight one. Lol. Many seem to find homosexual couplings galore. But, honestly, I'm hooked. Also, thank you for your review on "The Dragon"-I definitely went back and changed the "less" to "lest"-I'm a grammatical freak, and I'm ever so grateful. Keep writing!