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for Let Them Eat Cake!

by roxierose13

person Metis
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked it! It doesn't surprise me that Harry would want to make a cake from scratch for Hermione. He just seems like the type xD I would have liked to know what liquid Draco managed to pour in the batter and whether or not the "real" cake was store-bought(which I assume it is?). I personally like Draco as bottom, but that's just my opinion(I like it when he's put in his place xD).

It was really good, in my opinion. I liked the writing and I thought the situation of making a cake was cute. (And I would also assume Draco sucks at cooking.) Great job. C:
person Juana13
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i can't believe people don't like this! this story was hilarious! hahahaha! don't listen to others. i really do like this story. the sex was hot, and it was funny how harry kept slipping in the spilt egg. i could just picture a cartoon harry slipping on the egg and falling on the floor over and over again. hahahahaha!!! don't leave the site. know that there's one fan out here who loves all your writings!!!!
person Kiersten
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Psh!
your a good writer.
everyone is just jealous.
person Rae
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fuck the bad reviewers (pardoning my French) but I think you're a fantastic writer. This story is funny, cute, and all that good nonsense, and I greatly enjoyed it. As well as your other works. Don't let stupid prats get to you.
person Melissa S
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm reviewing mostly because of the note at the end of this story regarding flames. I think that it's sad that you would have that problem, because, really, these are some of the better H/D fics that I've seen.

And this one is cute. Draco trying to bake is an adorable image.
person Steph
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't dislike you! I promise :) And I definitely didn't dislike this story... :D
person Rabe
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I never realized this was your story! I really like it. I may have reviewed already, but I don't remember.

You know I've been looking for fics to read, and I stumbled upon your master list. I had no idea you had written so much! I thought you only had the few WIPs. I was reading summaries, and a few looked familiar including this one. What a coincidence that I had read your stories before without realizing it was you! I'm going to go check out some more.
person The Ultimate Otaku
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE your fics! PLLEAASEE don't leave! Your stuff is the most original stuff I've seen on aff.net since I've discovered it! Please don't leave the site! I wish this stuff could be put up on Schnoogle.com, but Schnoogle doesn't allow this high rating, which is why I'm here at aff.net.

Anyway, I really loved this fic. The relationship between Draco and Harry is just adorable. Harry's constant slipping on the egg made me laugh a ton. Also, I can really relate to Draco's feelings on cooking; I am a terrible cook, and I don't like how long it takes to make stuff, or having to put loads of ingredients in stuff. I especially dislike baking.

But even so, Draco's naivete with the cooking is just so silly. It's very in character though, I can really see how he'd be like that. He's spoiled.

Very nice hot kitchen scene, even if it is in egg, eww. XD
person bressa
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love all your stories, their just fab!
keep up the good work!
person RabidSqurl
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I for one like the story...