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for Torment

by DarkAngel30

person Crmy
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE, DAMMIT!!!!!!! UR DRIVING ME NUTS, HURRY HURRY HURRY
person Crmy
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello, great story so far, update soon, i'm dieing here lol
Cheers
Crmy
person anon
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
stupid effing voldie! poor harry! update soon! :-/
person HentaiZaru
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh My Gosh! That was crazy! You must update!!!!
person Draconayzia
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn! This just brings the bad aspects of Harry's life out in full focus.

Thanks for straying from cutting though. Everyone seems to use that in their plots as the first method. ^^;
person anon
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
s'ok. harry seems too nonchalant and arrogant though, like a whole different person. is it supposed to be like that? also, everything goes by kind of fast. update soon though! ^_^
person HentaiZaru
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT, I AM GOING CRAZY!!! YOU MUST UPDATE OR I WILL DIE!!!! WEEEEEEEEE!!!!
person Draconayzia
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As depressing as this story is it's very well written. I look forward to the next chapter.
person HentaiZaru
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe Draco would SMIRK after what he heard! Please update!!!
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And just WHERE do you think Chapter 2 is? HMMM? I don't see it... ::looks around frantically for another chapter:: Nope, not here!

You have a hreat plot coming along, even though your writing format is off. Oh, well. Can't be perfect, can we?