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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First of all: I love this story!
As for your German, well, I guess my France wouldn't be any better... ;)
So if you don't mind a little help from a German girl, here are your German parts in right grammar and all:
You can not harm what is mine...
Du kannst was mein ist keinen Schaden zuf
As for your German, well, I guess my France wouldn't be any better... ;)
So if you don't mind a little help from a German girl, here are your German parts in right grammar and all:
You can not harm what is mine...
Du kannst was mein ist keinen Schaden zuf
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just a quick review.
I think your story is great!
I just wait in anticipation of the next chapter.
Just to say, your doing a great job, keep it up!
I think your story is great!
I just wait in anticipation of the next chapter.
Just to say, your doing a great job, keep it up!
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, very dark there. I can only hope that things will get better for all of them in the future.
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have just found this fic and I really love it. I've just finished the current chapter and I can't wait to read the next one. Please update soon.
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really good. *grins* I love it! more please!
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't able to review yesterday because my new born was crying a lot being that she's sick, but on to the story, hope that Dean comes out of this alright, I really don't want him to die, his other half needs him. So Please don't kill him @_@.
Other then that great story hope you update SOON...
Other then that great story hope you update SOON...
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok so maybe I over reacted earlier and this is the best chapter so far.(chap.15)
I mean came the sex scene be any more hotter between those two (well maybe!). I mean I so hot and bother by this scene, that I had to curse my boyfriend for not being here so I could devour him. ^_^ well on to the story.^_*
I mean came the sex scene be any more hotter between those two (well maybe!). I mean I so hot and bother by this scene, that I had to curse my boyfriend for not being here so I could devour him. ^_^ well on to the story.^_*
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i just wanted to say that i love this story.
PLUS......
i want to say that i will thoroughly enjoy being a dirty pervert burning in hells fiery inferno for sinners like me who enjoy the though off a bit of man on man action.
draco/harry -------snarry or any hot same sex pairing is great.
as long as it's not hurtful to anyone and it floats your boat it fine
live and let live
xoxoxoxoxox
jo
PLUS......
i want to say that i will thoroughly enjoy being a dirty pervert burning in hells fiery inferno for sinners like me who enjoy the though off a bit of man on man action.
draco/harry -------snarry or any hot same sex pairing is great.
as long as it's not hurtful to anyone and it floats your boat it fine
live and let live
xoxoxoxoxox
jo
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! I just finish reading chapter 13. WOW! I mean that had to be one of the best chapters that I have read in a long time, I mean I have read great chapters but this one is so far the best one. The fight with Harry and Ron and Draco what bloody brilliant.
Keep Up the Great writting. *_*(eyes shining in amazement)
Now on to the next chapter
Keep Up the Great writting. *_*(eyes shining in amazement)
Now on to the next chapter
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well done again! I hope Dean is okay though.