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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why is chapter 4 so messed up? I had to print it off to read it...I think it needs to be re-formatted. oh well, on to other chapters!
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
fallow=follow
watch your 'then' and 'than' placement
muggel=muggle
other than that I follow your story rabidly!
watch your 'then' and 'than' placement
muggel=muggle
other than that I follow your story rabidly!
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dear God. What an incredible and powerful story. I am amazed at how well you write about the darkness that exists in every single person. This story has made me think about what book 7 may be about. How will Harry kill Voldemort, without destroying himself or anyone else he loves? I love how you have done this and I can't wait to read more. please update soon, I will be looking for it daily......
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay...so, I just finished reading Chapter Fifteen, where you posted the note about what that little bitch in your dorms said. UGH! I happen to be adoring your story, first off. Second off, I feel the need to just sort of publicly refute her bullshit!
I was trained to be a missionary. For two years, I spent four hours a week in an intensive study of the bible, being trained to know it inside and out, so I could be a missionary. When, for family reasons, I could no longer attend those classes, I went to a church closer to my home than the place I had been studying and spent two to three hours a week there, also studying the bible. Over a year later, when I had some difficulties with one of my teachers at that church, I attended classes at another church with a friend for a year. So, I have spent a total of over four years in intensive study of the bible. NO WHERE in it does it state that god hates homosexuals. Actually, the bible contains 36 admonishments to homosexuals, but over THREE HUNDRED admonishments to heterosexuals. Tell me, which group does it sound like god feels needs more guidance?
Also, just because she's obviously a prude, frigid little bitch doesn't mean that those of us with normal sex-drives are sickos. Thanks, but no. Sex is necessary and it's been proven that human beings are innately sexual creatures. We are taught to "control" our instincts with logic and morals, but our bodies are still driven, in many ways, by the natural urge to have sex. So sorry to Little Miss Priss, but just because she isn't getting any doesn't give her the right to have a stick up her arse about sex in general.
I also happen to be a writer. Not just of fanfiction (And if you ever check out some of the major HP webpages you will see that JKR condones fanfiction and in fact finds it flattering.), but also of books. Unpublished, so far, but hopefully not for much longer! I also have a dear friend who recently published a book...she has been writing fanfiction for years and it was, in fact, a huge deal among her devoted readers who couldn't wait to buy her book! So fanfiction isn't worthless or unread or pathetic...it's a way to expand your writing skills and amuse both yourself and your readers at the same time!
And while I could continue to shred everything else this bitch said, I've decided it's not worth my time and effort to do so. I happen to, as I said before, adore your story. I haven't been able to stop reading since I found it! I'm going to go read more as soon as I post this review, actually. Thank you so much for giving me something so wonderful to read!
~ FallenAngel
I was trained to be a missionary. For two years, I spent four hours a week in an intensive study of the bible, being trained to know it inside and out, so I could be a missionary. When, for family reasons, I could no longer attend those classes, I went to a church closer to my home than the place I had been studying and spent two to three hours a week there, also studying the bible. Over a year later, when I had some difficulties with one of my teachers at that church, I attended classes at another church with a friend for a year. So, I have spent a total of over four years in intensive study of the bible. NO WHERE in it does it state that god hates homosexuals. Actually, the bible contains 36 admonishments to homosexuals, but over THREE HUNDRED admonishments to heterosexuals. Tell me, which group does it sound like god feels needs more guidance?
Also, just because she's obviously a prude, frigid little bitch doesn't mean that those of us with normal sex-drives are sickos. Thanks, but no. Sex is necessary and it's been proven that human beings are innately sexual creatures. We are taught to "control" our instincts with logic and morals, but our bodies are still driven, in many ways, by the natural urge to have sex. So sorry to Little Miss Priss, but just because she isn't getting any doesn't give her the right to have a stick up her arse about sex in general.
I also happen to be a writer. Not just of fanfiction (And if you ever check out some of the major HP webpages you will see that JKR condones fanfiction and in fact finds it flattering.), but also of books. Unpublished, so far, but hopefully not for much longer! I also have a dear friend who recently published a book...she has been writing fanfiction for years and it was, in fact, a huge deal among her devoted readers who couldn't wait to buy her book! So fanfiction isn't worthless or unread or pathetic...it's a way to expand your writing skills and amuse both yourself and your readers at the same time!
And while I could continue to shred everything else this bitch said, I've decided it's not worth my time and effort to do so. I happen to, as I said before, adore your story. I haven't been able to stop reading since I found it! I'm going to go read more as soon as I post this review, actually. Thank you so much for giving me something so wonderful to read!
~ FallenAngel
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG! I CAN'T WAIT TILL YOUR NEXT CHAP. PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
WITH EVERY CHAPTER YOUR STORY GET BETTER AND BETTER.
KEEP UP THE GREAT JOB.^_^
WITH EVERY CHAPTER YOUR STORY GET BETTER AND BETTER.
KEEP UP THE GREAT JOB.^_^
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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am completely hooked on this story. When I got to chapter 19 I hadn't realized that, that was the last chapter I was so into it. It came as a shock. I love Harry and Draco's fae characters, yet how they still act quite similar to their original characters. When ever they are too out of character I can't get into the story, but you have done a wonderful job. Bloody Brilliant!!
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! What an awesome set of chapters! PLEASE update soon!
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is getting really really interesting.
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay Harry can get prengnat
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! Are you still looking for a beta??