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Chapter 15 rant response: God made everyone in His image, and since God is Love...guess what? Everyone is Love, and there is no sin.

Also, don't you have a network hub to split the signal?

A few pointers: You are confusing their, there, and they're; their is the plural possessive form, there is a location, and they're is the contraction of they are. You are also confusing loose and lose, where and we're and were, as well as then and than. Please, check out www.askoxford.com or www.dictionary.com for clarification. This would make a good story even better.

Shorten the dividing line in Chapter Four; it makes the chapter too wide for the screen and going back and forth is giving me a headache!

Not again and with Seamus watching this time too.

OMGOMGOMG! PLEASE UPDATE SOON
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH.
PLEASE, PLEASE, OH PLEASE UPDATE SOON ^_^

Yay!! New chapter! I love the ending(Snape deserved that taunting ^.^) and I'm anxious to see what Hari does with the connection she gained briefly with George. I hope she helps Fred! I feel so bad for him! And poor Dean..your brilliant work is making me cry! Lol

Keep going!! Update soon please!!

Ok, here's the thing...Do you know the difference from the following words: 'We're, Were, their, etc??' Becuz, after reading this story, it looks as if you don't and judging by the other mistakes, your REALLY need to work on your lack of english skills, plus, your beta isn't doing his/her job, becuz, judging by ALL the mistakes she missed in every single chapter/paragraph, she needs major help with her grammar..

Well, down to the more positive note of this review..The stories great..I absolutely love it..I hope to read more soon..

I just wanted to say...I have no idea why chapter 4 is like that.
It SHOULD look like all the other chapters I beta'd. It's really buggin me now!
Sigh...there really isn't anything wrong with it, it's just set kinda wide, sorry bout that.
It must be from when I e-mailed it back to Ayue. Don't really know.

A little correction to your German sentence
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Sie k

I haven't cried when reading anything since the first time I read Half Blood Prince! *claps* Brilliant idea! Wonderful couples! You captured every single character J.K created perfectly and gave them new life! Ah! Sirius/Snape was something I'd never seen eye to eye about, but it was amazing how you set that up!

I kinda feel bad for Hermione, but honestly you're right with how you made Draco reason! Ron and Hermione aren't meant to be, not in this story! My favorite couples are Harry/Draco(of course) and Seamus/Dean! I was sobbing through the 21st chapter when Dean was finally back with Seamus! Ah! You better make Seamus live or so help you..bad..THINGS will happen!

^.^ You're a great author! Keep it up and update soon please!