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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Praise to Ayue Edigoshi. Tolkien would be proud.
(ps, hehe, tried to go serious there. Hope i spelt your name right. Sorry if i didn't. It's a curious one you know?) I'd give you a lenghty-er review but i like how i've written it so far. Very professional yes?)
Tolkien really would be proud. ^_^
(ps, hehe, tried to go serious there. Hope i spelt your name right. Sorry if i didn't. It's a curious one you know?) I'd give you a lenghty-er review but i like how i've written it so far. Very professional yes?)
Tolkien really would be proud. ^_^
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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch 2: Not sure what I was expecting because the reviews were all over the place.
Very interesting ideas and nice presentation. I have to go Christmas Shopping before the story closes, but I will try and read more later at home.
Very interesting ideas and nice presentation. I have to go Christmas Shopping before the story closes, but I will try and read more later at home.
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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, RON HAS TO TOP!!! I just can't picture Hiaro as a bottom...he's too...I dunno. He's just more feminine that Ron and Ron's too scared and nervous to bottom, I think. I think he'd be more comfortable topping his first time...it's the closer of the two positions to what Ron's used to during sex anyway. ^.^ Love this, please updated soon...I'm addicted!
~ FA
~ FA
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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:o Wow, Ron is so awesome! Update soon!
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I went to a Christian college and they didn't restrict any sites... Maybe it won't be as bad as you say it'll be...
But please don't drop any stories. I REALLY don't like with authors do that. I don't really care if it takes longer, just so that the stories get finished.
Just my humble opinion. =o)
But please don't drop any stories. I REALLY don't like with authors do that. I don't really care if it takes longer, just so that the stories get finished.
Just my humble opinion. =o)
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting happenings, Can't wait to see what happens next time. In relation to the ron/hiaro delima I'd say that I'd originally pictured Ron for the dom role however thinking back to an original story i read a couple years ago called 'For Lord and Lands' by Delilah DeSora(if you read original slash I recommend reading for lord and lands) that a sub king wis a possibility, it'd depend mostly on how you picture your characters when you write them.
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read other fics that only update once a month, so long lag time won't put me off. You should probably add a short extra warning at the beginning of the fic and recent chapters, so those who dislike waits can just avoid your stories till they're completed. Good luck at your new school.
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's okay and good luck and congradulations.
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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
quick, quick.....I
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I think Hiaro should top first then Ron and then you should ask agian to see what one the people like the best. Updated Soon Please.