rate_review Reviews

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE LOVE IT. CANT WAIT FOR MORE.

I loved that once again!

AWESOME FIC!!!!!!!!!!!

And what happens now???!!!!!

HHhhhmmmmm?????

Desperate minds want to know!!!

XD

oh wow... great story I can't wait till the next chapter!!!!!!!

Oh well done again! I guess none of them even think Harry would be strong enough to be Draco's mate? Hope they are proved wrong in that respect. Can't wait for more.

Your plot isn't bad, it is an interesting idea. However, the flow of your story is very choppy. The story line is hard to follow, there doesn't seem to be enough connections and transitions from one idea to the next. Perhaps you should get a beta and work with him or her to write the parts you have writen so they flow much better than they do now. Other than that, the plot is pretty good. Oh yeah, before I forget, perhaps you should try to spell check your work. Sometimes a misspelled word retracted from you story because I was trying to figure out what you meant.

To awsome sorry about your uncle. Update soon.

i'm sorry, i've been through that, twice. Take your time.

woot woot it is teh good hurry up with the next chapter ^_^ wow I sound rude >_>

THIS IS AMAZING. I LOVE THE NEW TAKE ON SIRIUS, AND THE PART WITH DRACO IS F'NING SWEET! SNAPE SHOULD JUST GIVE IT UP ALREADY I TOTALLY AGREE. HEY DID SIRIUS DIE AT THE END THIER THAT WAS SLIGHTLY CONFUSING.