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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want to say it's time harry get off his high horse and SMELL THE SHIT THAT IS LIFE. I see the angry that harry has for life, but that what war is and he needs to see the big picture. Dumbdore knew harry COULD NOT HANDLE THE TRUTH. Black also has to grow a back bone, he love snape withe passon I love and you doing a great job. Ron great but I see more going on with charactor then you saying. Love this story please email me when you post again. Will be wait for update.
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I counted a several errors in the first five paragraphs alone. Get a beta reader, or at least read over what you write. When you clean your story up, (why did you write one if you didn't want to put any effort into it?) then maybe I'll read it.
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, by the way, are you even old enough to log onto this web site? From the level of your writing, it's obvious you haven't graduated from high school yet.
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
JUST WANTED TO SAY THANKS EVERYBODY! And for your info Snarky I have graduated highschool, and I happen to be dyslexic. I think all things considering i've been getting alot better and yeah i'm in the process of getting a betta. So thank you for your kind concern! When it's betta'ed maybe then you can melt that ice heart of yours enough to read it.
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE RIGHT NOW! you jus have to, A__A !!!
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it very much.
Please update soon
Please update soon
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOO you can't just leave us hanging like that!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
literally, CAN NOT WAIT!
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I loved that! Can't wait for more.
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love your story,but you need a beta for your spelling.but other than that it a good story keep going.