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for The Lord of The Fae

by Draggenxx

person anon
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK YOU SEE YOU JUST CAN"T LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THAT!!!! I can't wiat for the next chapter please hurry!!
person Amessis
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it again!
person madnesswithinme
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHH!I can't believe it! Damn tats awesome, really! Update, yeah?? oh wait, 'ye ken' is that 'you can'in irish brogue speak?
person madnesswithinme
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i knew it, I knew Ron was losing it!!! *Gah* hotness between the guys and I must say I can'y wait 'till Harrys strong enough for a full mating! Yum.
person ayadaya
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. It's different and passionate, and overall a very refreshing change from the other stories I've recently read. It's true that you need a beta. When a story flows smoothly- without grammatical or spelling errors- the quality of the story doubles. However, from reading the previous reviews, it looks as if you are working on that. Keep writing, you can always have it beta-read when you are finished. Don't let the nit-picking reviews discourage you.
person Amessis
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww, come on- Draco's got to be stronger than Ron! i knew Ron was an evil bastard- at least it sure was seeming that way. well done.
person Amessis
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well done again! I just can't find much about this Ron to like at all- I know he's been through a lot too- but I think and hope he's in for a rude awakening. I'm still hoping that Draco will unleash on all of them, or leave them high and dry after their reception.
person madnesswithinme
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
stupid weasely! Update soon!!!!! :)
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi yah hope everyone likes this chapter was long in coming I know, but class...yeah. Lol got to love it though. I dont know I kind of felt rather like it needed something more what do you think?
person momoko
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good story