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Just to tell you....there is no such thing as "worthless writing". not all writing pays you back with money or physical rewards, that is true, but it still has value. Writing ANYTHIHNG helps develope your creativity, helps you relax, or helps you releave tension and stress, whether your writing a poem, a novel, a short story, or fanfiction. It also helps you develope writing skills and improve your grasp on the language. and for nothing else it's not worthless because it has value to YOU. no one else might like it but at leaste YOU like it and YOU can enjoy it. thats all that really matters in the end. You write really well. your story is really well developed with in depth and captivating character developement and plot. don't stop writing because someone tells you it's worthless...most likely your "friend" is just jealouse or spiteful so don't worry about it. your a great writer and i hope that you continue writing this work and any other work you have. GOOD LUCK :D

Oh I loved that! Can't wait to see what happens next.

omg the sex was just the hottest thing in the world, i swear i had to leave after reading that part...i love it, keep up the good work....

KUDOS

*~*Lilith leFey*~*

Hi!!!
I really like your story, but please...your german is horrible... personally i think you used an online tranlator. am i right? if not then you sould think about getting extra lessons, because i know how hard to learn german is...but I'm sure you used an online tranlator because they never make right german grammar...

Melle

OMFG....it has taken me forever to getting around and reading all of this, but once i started i really couldn't stop....plz update soon....i'm loving it...KUDOS

*~*Lilith leFey*~*

Great chapter. how on earth had voldermort gotten rons soul? I think you might need a beater reader as some of the words areoff. ie toile instead of toil. of instead of or.

Uh-oh...
>>"Ich verzeihe Ihnen nicht f

THANKS AGAIN EVERYONE! YOU ROCK! oh and my german is extramly...extreamly rusty like almost nill! used online translator if anyone here knows german?....anybody? It would be a big help its not going to be in every chapter just some key battles and help would be amazing!

That was amazing again! Well done.

I love this story! It's great. Can't wait for more!