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by carpedraconis

schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is HOT. i love conflicted Draco sooooooo much. a suggestion? proofread your stuff to make sure your tenses are consistent. it's one of my biggest problems with my own work, i'll start out writing in the present tense and regress into past tense because it's so much easier to write it....but yea, HOT. Who doesn't love some good old fashioned guilt-driven-closet-sex? Mmmm....