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by Shippa

person stray523
schedule May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like Connie's character and can't wait to see more of him. Robin too.
person BabyBlueRowen
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really good.If you could, please e-mail me when you update so I can read more.
person The w00t Girl
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story, love it all and glad to see it will be a Remus/Severus flick. As for the eyes, I rather enjoy the different colors, for most wolves do have normal brown eyes but can have yellow or green or even blue eyes. Which is rare since not a whole lot of wolves will have blue or green eye color, the grammer and spelling is wonderful, glad to see that someone uses a spell checker or a beta. As for the Beta fish, will it be a male or female? And will it have some special role in this story or just kind of a background character to fill a space? I look forward to reading more of this wonderful story and to see the development between Severus and Remus.
person addie
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i thought all werewolves had tawny colored eyes?
person Lisa
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi,I like the start of this,I like Severus/Remus together.can`t wait for the next part!
person s and s blah
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great start I love connie and robin