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for More Than Meets the Eye

by ryzmah

person moxie
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is just getting better and better, congrats on the pregnancy!
person vic
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
your story is so great, i am really starving for the next chap.
greets from austria, vic
person Raye
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say a quick congratulations on the baby and that I love your story plot!
person Leli
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read it all in one night, on my tiny cell phone screen. In short, you have me hooked. The wedding was beautiful, can't wait for the smut!
person Panther Eyes
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lovely wedding. cant wait 2 read the honeymoon chapter.
person allie
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update
person Anon
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this so much! :) Great fic.
person BuffyXO
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! I cannot believe that this is your first story, because I am completely captivated by your command of character and pacing. Congratulations on such a strong first outing. I cannot wait until you update and they are finally married. Whew! I think it will be rather hot! I had to fan myself through this chapter and can only imagine what you have in store for us.
person Anon
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pleeeeeeeeeeease update. I love this fic!
person Eliza
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i have a friend: a HP fan who has never read a fanfiction... soo i made her read a part from your story...the scene that draco and hermione take the oath and agree on 5 things.. i believe it is brilliant... and she loved it.. i am not sure if she will keep reading ..but i wanted to share this with you.. your story is someone's first piece of fanfiction reading...and that scene/plot/idea whatever is one of my favorite...

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