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for More Than Meets the Eye

by ryzmah

person DarkLady
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I think this fic is fantastic and I don't think there are enough Draco/Hermione marriage law fics out there. I am looking forward to reading more, and I really think you did the love scene justice!
person iluv2dance
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!! So glad I stumbled onto this story! It's marvellous! Who's side is Draco on? Will it show by the end? Can NOT WAIT for more chapters! Loved it! Is there anyway that you can contact me to know when it's updated? Do you have a page on Fan Fiction or anything? Please update really soon! This story is bloody gold! Well done!
person BuffyXO
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, it was worth the wait! What an amaziningly beautiful wedding night between Hermione and Draco. I am glad that they will not have to face Dumbledore immediately, because that would just be too awkward. I did not pick up on Draco being mushy so much when their core's split and joined, but I am sure you will expand on that in the next chapter. I just hope that they can bask in the glow of being newlyweds for a while without the Order or the Dark Lord curtailing their joined bliss. I think a mini ferrett would be the perfect post honeymoon gift for them. I also think that Hermione is going to have quite a great time in learning how to please Draco -- the lucky, lucky girl. Keep up the awesome work!
person Anon
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome awesome awesome. This fic is sweeeet. :)
person nyn
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great, great chapter! You're doing an amazing work with this fic! Can't wait for more :)
person Panther Eyes
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nice honeymoon sence.
person vic
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey, it's me again.
this was a great chap. i love it really. you've done your writing work very well. i hope you can update sooner, but this chap was worth waiting. there's only one thing left: what do you think about translations (to german)? i would be glad to translate this great story. if you're positive, mail me. wickienchen@hotmail.com
greets from austria, vic
person kazfeist
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I remember reading the first chapter of this story and then not seeing it again. The story seems to have taken off, though and has some very interesting twists in its plot. Keep up the good work. There were a couple of grammar glitches and typos, but overall a very nice effort! :D
person kazfeist
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ryz, if I may call you Ryz, I have now finished all the chapters, and you've done a wonderful and creative job with this premise. :D
person Lady Lynn
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As unfortunate as it is I must have missed when you updated the wedding chapter so imagine how happy i was to click on the story and find not one but teo new chapters! im so happy that it's being continued, I was so worried it was given up on, so yay!