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for More Than Meets the Eye

by ryzmah

person Mandy
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story,I cant wait until you get the next chapter up and I hope there will be many more chapters to come :-D
person Julz
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read more!!
person jenna
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love your story, especially how you were able to make dumbledore so tricky. i can't wait for the next chapter.
person amy
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i am fully enjoying this story. its refreshingly different than other stories. the idea of the oath and the trick was very good. i can't wait to read the story. although i would like to hear more about the marraige from draco's piont of view. and more about what's going on at the Manor. anyways good job, and keep the chapters coming
person Stratyllis
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is very good. I love DM/HG marriage law stories.
person TiffANY
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is such a GREAT story!

I can't believe I didn't read it before, please continue I can't wait to see what happens!

BRILLIANT work!
person Julz
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! You have my full attention! Can't to read more!!
person katie
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it your doing a very god job :)
person vic
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, great chap. I know you told it's boring, but it's a part of the story, you can't always write action-capters...
so go on fast, I'm already waiting!
vic
person Donavon.
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is simply brilliant!! I will be anticipating the next update with hope of a quick post.
As a writer, I wish I had considered the plot. Well Done, and best wishes, Donavon.