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for More Than Meets the Eye

by ryzmah

person martha
schedule January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this story is amazing. I'm fond of 'marriage law' stories but yours was particularly well written. Can't wait to read how you continue the plot. Please update soon.
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow What at approach to the married law this need to keep going to good to let it here.... Please update soon...
person missy2
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is one of the best stories I've read in a while! Please please PLEASE update it soon!
person Verie
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update already! I've been dying to read this for so long!
person oztan
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so good.
person TALE
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG ... I love your story. You are one of my two favorite authors (dynonugget is the other). Please update soon. Tale
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update again soon i love this story x
person bean1498
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh this has been very nice. I put it with my favorites. I hope you'll continue it, so we find out what happens, but it you must leave it, it's wonderful. :) I love your style and I adore the characters. I like the twist on the plot with their cores being predestined/joined. I also like the part where dear ol' Albus says that maybe their conflicts were more about pent up passion. :) Anyway, I look forward to more on this one, but if you're done, I still love it. :)
person kazfeist
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I remember starting this a while back. I'm so glad you've updated. Can't wait to see the rest of the plot, and I hope your stay in Britain is happy and eventful. :D
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey youre back with a beautiful chapter!
i have to say i'm sorry, but i havent started translating yet...
but in some time i will do (i am at a changing point in my life too and i don't know yet which way to take and there's work and university and so on)
I'm glad you're back and look forward to the rest of the story!
vic