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CHAPTER 19
Hi, Slashy,
Congratulations on finishing your first fanfiction! This is a big deal, I am really impressed:) This story might not be as dark and scary as I usually read, but it was damn Hott! This last chapter was really sweet and, yes, this story does deserve a sequel.

Good job, Slashy Snitch,
Thank you for writing:D

Can't wait for the sequel. Post soon!!!!

I can't believe it's over. I wonder how the rest of the wizarding world will react, I mean the teem hero pregnant. That should be entertaining. I can't wait what's next to come.

Awwwww!! Awesome! I can't wait to read the sequel, please update soon!! I"m so excited to read it, this fic is amazing! I really loved it!!

i love you i love you i love you will you marry me i think i love you
love,
madamV

oh, i love this story so far! and on that voting front, You so have to update on Changed.

Wow! The pregnancy has totally added a twist to the story! But what about Harry's uncle? does he get a part in this? and what is going to happen to the ron/hermione pairing? hmm this is really interesting. well i was gonna review all the rest of the chapters but a) too many chapters b)i wanted to like give my opinion but the chapter was already out! *hmph!* gosh i hate it when that happens! oh well! but what about lucious's mean streak? gonna have that in there somewhere? ooh what about RON'S REACTION TO THE PREGNANCY TEST! HAHAHAHAHAHA! OOOH, IM GONNA LAUGH MY "arse(as you put it XD)" OFF! you should add like a holiday in there somewhere too. like let them have like 4th of july (cause harry's birthday was a few days ago) then celebrate dracos birthday! are you gonna introduce professor snape in this? ooooh ohohoh! what if dumbledore suddenly turned out to be a bad guy because like of that stupid note(the one where he is raped)? oh no what if dumbledore(am i even spelling dumbledore or hermione right?no. im not. i know this but am too lazy to fix it) is under the imperious curse!!!!!! gah! stupid voldemort! wait, that's not even in the story! *got worked up over nothing* gah. okay well what if dean suddenly starts hitting on draco/harry and wants to make it a love triangle because he found out ginny was cheatin on him? you don't really see that many doting fans in this fic. oh then dean gets together with pansy! oh what am i saying? GAHHHH SO FRUSTRATING!! well, what if draco get's like some of harry's powers and defeats voldemort for harry? hmmm? oh and well i think they're kid should be a girl(a.because they are both guys who need a girl in they're life b. i think it would be interesting for draco and harry to give many advice to their feminine daughter and she actually does it and gets embarrassed! gah!) well i think you should name her,.....hmmm.... Emma! Emma Michelle Malfoy! oh yeaaaaaa. okay, i am like oh so sorry that i wrote this really really really really long review and that i actually didn't even tell you squat in it! gah! i am so confusing *tear*!! well, anyway, im gonna go before i express more of my wimpy ideas! yea, so im going to try to fall asleep (its 11:45 and i actually dont want to go to school tomorrow (friday) and fake sick! :)) well see ya later! ( oh yea, and thanks for giving me the link :D)- o2xquisite

OMG I AM LIKE SO SORRY I AM REVIEWING AGAIN BUT I WAS READING SOME OF YOUR OTHER REVIEWS AND GOT AN IDEA (yes one of those random weird crappy ideas, i feel so sorry for my fan fic readers :D) what if like harry got sick from killing voldemort (like one of those things where if he dies, he curses you) and harry is dying and draco goes through a depressing stage with his DAUGHTER! (should totally be a girl and YES to the sequel!) But like you know that new research on stem cell development and how the baby's stem cells actually help the parent? well what if the DAUGHTER'S cells actually cures harry? just a thought! Okay, now currently LEAVING! *bows* an announcement is made, *o2xquisite has now left the building, everybody let out those breath's you've been holding and hug the neighbor next to you!* :D

*sneaks in the building the back way* okay, i was reading my reviews to make sure i didn't sound totally retarded and it is now 12 holy crap well on with my typing. i meant to write manly instead of many on my first review. well love the chapters and i think ill just sneak out the way i just came in! :P

OMG!!! I hsave spent the last 2 days reading This story, asnd i must say that it was more than worth it! I love D/H, and this on ewas really good, perfeclty described... basically I have to say out of 5 stars this gets a 6!