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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O.....did you..did you put that whole Ginny being shagged by Harry to distrub me? casue if you did it work. *gets torture stake out* and now that redheaded whroe is gonna pay!...even fi she was a virgin all that snogging in this char makes me....well....want to umm...KILL SOMEONE...but not you cause now you got draco move involved. anyway can there be a rough break up? like ginny dumbs harry after she gets chaught by draco being fucked by balise in the Hallway or in the room of requirement thinking it was another classroom!
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it is is intresting...is there going to be a harry ginny draco pairing?.....please...
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter
I'm excited to see how this progresses...
Will Harry still want to be in Slytherin though, and since he's got all of these fake memories, will he still retain some of them?
Also, I love the chapter update everyday, I can't tell you how much of a relief it is to read even short chapters everyday, keeps the interest levels right up there
I'm excited to see how this progresses...
Will Harry still want to be in Slytherin though, and since he's got all of these fake memories, will he still retain some of them?
Also, I love the chapter update everyday, I can't tell you how much of a relief it is to read even short chapters everyday, keeps the interest levels right up there
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So, as usual, this chapter was wonderful.
I don't like Ron though... I like the way you write him, I just don't like Ron, maybe something bad could happen to him.. that would be nice... and it could have to do with the story, that would be nicer.
Anyway,
Yay for an amazing story
I don't like Ron though... I like the way you write him, I just don't like Ron, maybe something bad could happen to him.. that would be nice... and it could have to do with the story, that would be nicer.
Anyway,
Yay for an amazing story
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, btw...
I vote for
**Used.** RATED NC-17. H/D, HP/SS. Harry is attacked, and Draco saves him. Or does he? Draco takes Harry to Voldemort, who tells Harry of some important information that changes his life dramatically. How does Harry respond to Draco's most important question that could change Harry's life? |The Dark Side would have all the answers. All Draco had to do was ask Harry.| (Contains Minor)
What can I say? Anything that even hints at a dark Harry makes me happy
I vote for
**Used.** RATED NC-17. H/D, HP/SS. Harry is attacked, and Draco saves him. Or does he? Draco takes Harry to Voldemort, who tells Harry of some important information that changes his life dramatically. How does Harry respond to Draco's most important question that could change Harry's life? |The Dark Side would have all the answers. All Draco had to do was ask Harry.| (Contains Minor)
What can I say? Anything that even hints at a dark Harry makes me happy
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, first, I like the story, except the Harry/Ginny *shudder* ewwww... ok, thats enough of that, it's just kind of squicky for me. Ron/hermione, I don't mind at all and even Draco/Pansy is okay, though Draco totally belongs to Harry! He's Harry's I tell you! ... :) Or rather, Harry is his. WHo's topping in this fic? I prefer a dom!Draco though that doesn't seem the way it's going... *shrugs*
Okay, second, you asked to tell you if there were grammar mistakes (now don't take this too personally, cause I am just wierd this way about grammar stuff). Anytime they say a spell, it needs to be italicized. Do you know the html codes for that? And when they talk, I noticed you do odd capitalizations, like in the wrong spots, also the punctuation is off. it should be: "blah blah blah," said so and so. (see the comma, then the next word isnt capitalized.) Same rule if its a question mark or exclamation point. ... oh, one last thing... :) Muggle is always capitalized! hp-lexicon is good for all of the cannon info online :D
So... sorry about the grammar stuff, I'm just nitpicky. T'is an interesting story... now if only Ginny would die... :)
Okay, second, you asked to tell you if there were grammar mistakes (now don't take this too personally, cause I am just wierd this way about grammar stuff). Anytime they say a spell, it needs to be italicized. Do you know the html codes for that? And when they talk, I noticed you do odd capitalizations, like in the wrong spots, also the punctuation is off. it should be: "blah blah blah," said so and so. (see the comma, then the next word isnt capitalized.) Same rule if its a question mark or exclamation point. ... oh, one last thing... :) Muggle is always capitalized! hp-lexicon is good for all of the cannon info online :D
So... sorry about the grammar stuff, I'm just nitpicky. T'is an interesting story... now if only Ginny would die... :)
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I choose **I Want You To Want Me.** and **I Thought I knew You.**
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for answering my questions!!!
I like the last 2 chapters a lot. Quite an unexpected turn of events, isn't it? Keep up the good work!
I like the last 2 chapters a lot. Quite an unexpected turn of events, isn't it? Keep up the good work!
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving the story so far! Please keep the chapters coming.
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a really great story. you are doing a fantastic job. keep up the good work and would it be possible for you to email me when the next chapter(s) come out????