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OMG!!!! what a FANTASTIC scene! *grins* what a turnm on! i LOVE sub harry! am about to go read your other stories! *grins*
i reviewed on ff.net, but have found it here. love it dude! bring on Draco fucking his sub!Harry!!!!!!
love ning

Wow! now we just have to replace the "toy" with Draco. =)

Damn, that was a hot chapter! I really wish I could get me one of those!!! ^_^ I'm getting the feeling that Ginny senses the attraction between Harry and Draco, so she's starting to distance herself. At least that's the immpression I'm getting. Either way, this is great stuff! EM

I'm really enjoying reading this so far, but Harry's new powers are pretty hard to take in stride. One or two exceptional abilities would be plausible, but your Harry is a demigod. It raises a lot of questions-- if he can literally do "anything he thinks", why is he still in Hogwarts? Is it really ethical for him to be spying on thoughts whenever he likes? Wouldn't he very quickly become bored and jaded, being able to control reality on a whim? While it's interesting to think of how Draco would behave knowing Harry could read his mind, I don't know if the Virtuous Harry Potter would really go so far as to just root through his head.

As I said, the writing is great, and the relationship between Harry and Draco is intriguing. It's just a little difficult to imagine Harry (or anyone, save, possibly, Star Trek's Q) having these kinds of powers and still existing as a likable and believable character.

wow! nice work :)

JRL

Can't wait, update soon. KEEP UP the GREAT work - great story so far

Im loving this fic even though i hate harry/ginny. I cant wait to see how H/D end up

I think you're doing fine so far. Let me guess, Ginny's decided she likes Dean better, and is actually trying to fix up Harry with Draco?

~Catstaff

Pffft, I'd so say no to him. Oh well, as long as there's no more Harry/Ginny I'm good.

Write more soon, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease?

Really liked it!