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for Picking Wildflowers

by SlashySnitch

person amyordinary
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I liked who you picked to be the father of the baby.. Ginny deserves it! Thank you so much for making it mpreg.. please let them have a boy! I'd definitely read a sequel... even if you suddenly decided to make it even longer than the original five chapters ;-D
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly luv this story so far ^_^ you are doing a great job!
person Eyes
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED this chapter.
WOW Colin!!!good for him!
I think they should have a little girl named Lily
person Kermit
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!!!! I would love a sequel.
person Kyande
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I believe there SHOULD be a sequel! This is too good to end, even if you have a few more chapters to go! I think the baby should be a boy, but I'm not sure about a name... A baby boy with blonde hair and greenish silver eyes. :)
person Codeigh
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want to see a sequel. I've enjoyed watching this story evolve and will be said to see it end.
person lazycrazykitten
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! Colin is the father (cackles madly). Ginny must be so pissed...I mean she could have had the boy-who-lived's child. As for a sequel...it really depends on how you end this story. I really can't decide until it's finished. I think they should have a girl, their baby would be sooo much cuter than Colin's and Ginny's. I mean with either blonde hair green eyes, or black hair and silver eyes, the child will be an absolute heartbreaker. Or they could just have twins and have one of each, a boy and girl. Names...hmmm...it has to be Malfoy worthy, so nothing too common...Adrianna...Taylor...Kylie...Aurora if it's a girl. For a boy...Abraxas...Maxwell...Evan...Aaron...Dorian.
person LiT
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay lol another fun filled chapter lol. I can't wait to see this be an mpreg lol I just love them. ^_^ looking forward to your next chapter.
person Sammy
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-The father of the baby
I'm shocked...I didn't even think about him being a part of the situation. I was staring at that name for a good five minutes before I started laughing LOL! She had to be desperate to lay down with the Double C. I just don't know what to say about that. I hope she lives an interesting life...Slut!Ginny is a major no no. She seems like the controlling type. I believe Colin's freedom is no more.

-Should there be a sequel?
Yes please. I'd love a follow up to this story since it will be ending soon. Would it start up directly where this story leaves off or will it be a few years from now? Perhaps they will have more than one child by then and we can get an interesting chapter written in the POV of one of the children (or their only child) about his/her life with Draco and Harry.

-The sex scene
Very nice! I kept wondering if someone was going to pop up and disrupt the flow again. So glad that they finally got some with each other. It was hot. My blood pressure has now resumed its regularly scheduled level.

-Should Harry and Draco have a child: Boy or girl?
Bring on the kiddies. I don't care if it is a boy or a girl. I like the thought of one or the other equally. I think it's easier to come up with boys names than girls and with a baby being born into the Potter Malfoy family, the child will need a good strong name that will fit also one that isn't used constantly.

-Names for the child?
Boys: Alexander, Laine, Christopher, Eric, Logan...
Girls: Arianna, Nicolette, Aya, Halee, Alexis...
person thrnbrooke
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh there has to be a sequel! Feel sorry for Colin. Ginny got what she deserves. Oh I can't wait for more! Pregnant Harry! Oh he'll be sooo cute! I hope its a boy! Can't wait for chapter 18!