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Okay, first, I only read the first and the last chapters, so I probably can't tell you that much about this story.
After you gave Harry superpowers in chapter one and made Draco a parselmouth you already hit two of my pet peeves, so I didn't want to keep on reading, but the sub! Harry thing intrigued me, so I thought perhaps it's just a problem of the first chapters and skipped a few. Perhaps I wouldn't be that confused if I hadn't done that, but... I don't understand how the Harry from chapter 1 became the pathetic creature in the last chapter. My guess is you became bored of super powered Harry and did something drastic to him to make him more interesting... but the only thing you did is making your own character out of character.
This story would be much more interesting if it were more thought through... Well, no. Just ignore me. As I said you hit my pet peeves, so I shouldn't be reading this story anyway. There are obviously a lot of people who like this and your writing style is okay. I just wanted to tell you what I think.

Number 1) THAT SEX SCENE WAS AMAZING! YOU ARE A GOD! *bows* One of the best I've ever read.

Number 2) I always knew Ginny was a slut. And I love that she's stuck with Colin. But I feel so sorry for him. She's going to cheat on him so much...he needs a nice mistress to keep him happy.

Numer 3) The thought of Harry getting knocked up...YES! I could see him with a baby girl and Draco being an over protective father, couldn't you? Like yelling at any boy that comes in contact with her.

As for names, I've always been partial to Lillie Rae, Merulina Tarquinia, and Tsukiko Raiden. For boys...Sasha Rene. My poor children, should I have any. *giggles*

Update soon, please! Sequel, new chapter, WHATEVER! Jaklyn just wants more of this fic. PLEASE.

<3 always, Your Humble Servant.

awesome sex scene! yay for ginny not having harrys kid! seriously though i loved this chapter!

Yay they're getting married! My email is valid I use it daily. I not sure abouts names for the baby but how about jamie for a first or second name. When I first read that harrys magic was being drained my first thought was voldermort was draining him somehow but then quickly decided that he was pregnant. I reckon the baby should be able to protect itself and harry with magic kinda like wyatt did on Charmed, if you haven't seen it the baby heals you and makes a sheild around you. I can't wait for the sequal it looks like fun times are ahead.

Then yes, I want a sequel. I was only hesitant before because some people have a sequel take place like 20 years in the future. That's so cute! At least they want a family!

XP lol no no no... I didn't actually want Harry to be th father.... it's been god knows how long since I've wished for a HetPreg. lol psh.... and yes- I AM quite a bit off as I am frequently reminded. XD lol

AS for Scimegour (sp?)..well.. that me trying to actually guess the random father you were sure to pick, due to Tonic-err...-Gin's slutty ways.... I knew it wouldn't be Dean, after all. lol.... elementary dear..erm.. Authoress, elementary. :D oh, and btw- Colin = the PERFECT rabdom daddy. ^ ^

..as far as sequels go.. I'm all for one. ... XP the sex(y) scene was great. ;D it actually DOES seem like they love each other...

oh... and.. though the idea of DHxHP kids isn't usually my thing- I say go ahead! ('cuz you're awesome. XP) er.... oh yes.. and I'd have to say, if there was a child... it should be inexplicably half Goblin.... sigh... that wa s aterrible joke- I'd actually choose a girl. ^ ^ Any French name is a nam I'd like. >.> this has nothing to do with my French heritage...<.<)

P.S. wow.. I'm going to stop typing now- sorry I like... type excessively when bored. XP Keep on writin'! ^ ^ <3!

The father of the baby
no one is in danger of being stabed with a spork anymore except ginny na having to marry collin is much better (worse?)
never even thought about collin ha ha ginny deserved that

Should there be a sequel?
yes definatly

Should Harry and Draco have a child: Boy or girl?
yes a boy

for the first chapter, i do not like harry as a character. he seems too showy of his powers, like he's superior and arrogant and we all know that harry isnt about that. i dunno, thats just a turn off for this story

I love this story!! I think ther should be a sequel! I think it's funny that Colin is the father. Please update soon!

Thankyouthankyouthankyou for updating so much!

I definetly loved how you made COLIN the father--HILARIOUS!

Draco and Harry should have a baby in the -sequel-, unless you decide to do a '__ year(s) later' chapter. The child should definetly be a girl.

Update soon!

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cho_cho_san