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for What I Did During The Summer

by Snape26

person hermioneandseverusfan
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
in chapter 17 hermione vists home you have it where she says she does not know what the sex of the baby is. but yet you had it where in chapter 14 snape escaspes she finds out she is having a girl. you have to fix that.
person SnapesPet30
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good!
person Nicole
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story I just read all of it and I love it! I can't wait to see what Snape has planned next for Harry AND Ron. After all , don't want him to get jealous, lol. However, is it wrong that I like Tonks better with Kingsly? I honestly can't see her with remus
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooo! Great chapter!
person JustMe
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, just one thing though.... it's WHORE not HORE.
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!! :)
person SnapesPet30
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter! *Laughs* Harry is going to get exactly what he deserves.
person Kris
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*laughs histerically* Wow, cant wait to see whats in that howler!
person Kris
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.o
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!