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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man ..who is sent the note ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ well she was right to the point ... that was great.. please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure she isn't annoying ... (right) ... I'm joking. Please update a.s.a.p!
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great i love it .. i cant wait in till the next chapter .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .... later for now
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
just so you know, its 'whore' not 'hore'
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man, Ron,Harry, and Ginny are really jerks and I am glad that Neville stood up for Severus and Hermione. Looking forward to reading more soon.
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story and I think that it has great potential, however your grammar is TERRIBLE. It is not entirely your fault because your bad grammar is very commonly used by Americans. "We don't know where Severus is at", "So this is where you live at". The "at" does not belong in these sentences.
We don't know where Severus is. Severus is at home, for example.
Please make the effort to correct your grammar. Bad grammar makes people sound ignorant and uneducated. Toodles.
We don't know where Severus is. Severus is at home, for example.
Please make the effort to correct your grammar. Bad grammar makes people sound ignorant and uneducated. Toodles.
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So I'm glad for the update but I'm not sure I understand... Harry and Ron hate Snape and don't seem at all remorseful for how they acted and now they want to STALK him and hermione? I hape Snape does something drastic
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you said in chapter 15 that hermione was going to have a girl and then in chapter 18 you said that she did not know what the baby was to her mom.