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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So Hermione's child will be a boy instead of a girl?
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update really soon
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
in chapter you need to say harry ron tried to rape your friend
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
in chapter 24 you need to say harry ron tried to rape your friend
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First and foremost I would like to tell you that this is a good story. But, and this is the part you may not like, you are in desparate need of a beta reader. There are countless mistakes that were overlooked by yourself. If you do have a beta reader, you need to get a new one. If you don't, get one quick. If a reader gets tired of trying to get around and understanding what you are trying to tell them, they are going to stop reading. You, as the writter, don't want that at all. Fix it. It's for your own bennifit. Good luck and keep writing.
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man is she pissed .. man harry is going to be pissed when he finds out ...please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to Lily putting Potter in his place for the way he is treating Severus and Hermione and trying to cause problems.
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When will nevile find out the truth!
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I love the story. LOL. Atleast Lily isn't going to treat Harry like some stupid little star. Love the fact that Lily is behind Severus and Hermione getting married. Wht's with Dumbledores sudden obsession with Snape? Please update soon. I am sitting on the edge of my seat to read wht happens next.
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man .. harry should be happy his mom is back .. please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
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