rate_review Reviews

You captured both characters perfectly, and especially Luna's...uniqueness!
I love the last line, "She gives them every month!" Ah I burst out laughing.
The solo play was really well done, and Hermione's reaction to it was perfect.
This was and is a really good fic, it sits perfectly as a oneshot, but there's just enough room for more if you get bored.
Great, great stuff.

Not much to say. I thought that the story was well devoleped. The characters were very "discriptive". I love the personality you stuck Luna with. Although, you left me hangin. Please follow up.

Sincerly,



The Prince of Madness

Hopefully there are more chapters in the works?!?!? Great original plot. I think for following chapters Hermione should go for the breat exam and then maybe her and Luna could go further (you have no doubt considered this so I don't know why I wrote it :) ) . This would also be a good story to turn in to a threesome/moresome if there were other people getting exams too. Just a thought.

This was wonderful! =D I rather liked it alot, keep writing!

This story is awesome. There just aren't enough Luna fics in the world. You're a very good writer. I'm working on starting up my own fanfic page (www.myspace.com/wantshentai) (I mostly used myspace for the free domain and web space) anyway, I was hoping I could post your story on the site. I plan to include proper citation (MLA) and give you credit. Shoot me an e-mail if that's okay with you. (wantshentai@yahoo.com) Thanks!

more! more! more! i love it!

Well... wasn't that just very lovely! Luna rocks, she's so spacey, and so, so very sexy. And she has her own natural self down there! I don't believe in shaving, just me...
Sorry, off on a tangent there. I personally wouldn't run from that, but Hermione's just so innocent and fun to tease...