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Has this fic bee abandoned?

hey...just read your story,and I do like it, but Draco seems to find Mione totally unatractive...and it looks like it's gonna take a long time for him to change his mind. I think your story would have much more followers if it contained more conversation and less naration.this should be about draco and hermione....and people are hungry for the two of them talking, arguing, kissing, hating....Though, I really like the definitions of certain expressions that you put out there. Also, try to eliminate other characters as much as possible. This is of course, only my opinion,and your idea of a story is only yours and you get to do whatever you want with it... but I think it would get you more reviews, and more reviews would make you more content ( I know what I'm talking about :)). Please don't get me wrong...just trying to help..... looking forward to new chapters.... zara

ur writing is really good
at times its dead interesting
but im soooo confused! plz help