rate_review Reviews

good story

James/Harry stories always intrigue me, especially when in the "James comes back to life" forte. It's facinating, to me, because Harry would, of course, love James in any way that his father requested. Living a life without parents would have made him vunerable to such attacks.

One thing I liked about your story was the fact that Remus lost Tonks, and the pain that he felt because of it. It added a lot to the story. Secondly, I liked how the initial startings of James's and Harry's relationship, how James started leaving his fingers a second longer on Harry's waist(I'm a waist person, on a girl, specifically, but on a small figure such as Harry, it works too.) A kiss that fell closer to the mouth, how Harry /sometimes/ let him cuddle closer.

An exellent story, love.

Seriously, incredible. I was all ready to flame for putting up this pairing, but the writing was superb. It was beautiful, dark poetry. I especially loved the part about the fogged up mirror, and the part about the sorrow in Remus's steps. The ending was fantastic as well.

In short, in all my time of reading HP fanfiction, this is the best one I've ever read. Keep it up.

well, this isn't my usual pairing, but the good writing made up for it [: i thought it was pretty fantastic and had a dark feel to it that i thought was brought out very nicely. i love how you wrote remus' disappointment and sorrow about losing tonks. keep on writing!