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for Love Thyself

by Lunadeath02

person Goruda
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I really do like how it turned out, but I could tell before the end of part one who's death would have been prevented. Sad that it didn't work out for the other, but, for him, it had already happened and can't be undone, his only hope is to stop it in another time-line. Too poetically predictable, but that's how it has to work. Now that I've given you kudos on that, I'd LIKE to be able to hand more to you on Hot Blooded Harry. Please continue on that one. It's a nice story, but needs to be added to. By the way, you lost your place in that story... it started developing a plot. *snickers and points, then grabs a spork* Also, I have one of these and, despite how long it's been, I still know how to use it, so get crackin' on those muses.

Work, love, and dance,

Goruda
person Mr. Happy Java Man
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good story here. I like the whole Idea. Though you got me confused a little. In the beginning the Twins avoided saying Serious or Sirius. Implying that in this timeline Sirius would have gone behind the veil. Yet he's in Meetings later on in the story. Just wondering.
person Anon
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sequel please??
I hope he/they changed thieir minds and learned to protect his mind to save sirus.
person anon
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Somewhat disturbing in a appealing way. It's the first Harry fucks himself story I can ever remember seeing. Good Job!
person Shadow2007
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story, i really did, BUT WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO FINISH "LIFEMATE" T_T